The innocence of a child, as a grown-up will mild;
The sweetness of dreams will lead to schemes;
The pleasure of the first rain will no longer remain;
The excitement to express will make you more depress;
Your faith in the truth will be crushed under the foot;
If you ever expect, happiness will except;
Every tear in your eye, will leak a secret to a spy;
On experiencing pain, detachment you will gain;
With these new facts of life, I feel more dead than alive!
These are the facts that hurt me; this is what bothers me, this is I want to change
This is what I feel “DEEP WITHIN ME”
We all need to understand that we have only one life to live, so we can’t die disappointed.
So LET’S LIVE and not merely exist.
With this note, I end my first blog.
Happiness,
Kally.
The sweetness of dreams will lead to schemes;
The pleasure of the first rain will no longer remain;
The excitement to express will make you more depress;
Your faith in the truth will be crushed under the foot;
If you ever expect, happiness will except;
Every tear in your eye, will leak a secret to a spy;
On experiencing pain, detachment you will gain;
With these new facts of life, I feel more dead than alive!
These are the facts that hurt me; this is what bothers me, this is I want to change
This is what I feel “DEEP WITHIN ME”
We all need to understand that we have only one life to live, so we can’t die disappointed.
So LET’S LIVE and not merely exist.
With this note, I end my first blog.
Happiness,
Kally.
Comments
Reality of life is described by you in such a manner that every body realize the value of it.
It's wonderful way of expressing the facts of life and making others understand.U r great to disperse your ideas to enlighten others thinking.
Spread ur wings wide.
From
Shubhs
It is a really good one, I liked your Creativity.
Hope to see some better creations of urs.
Lots of Best Wishes & Luv
Toshi
Filled with green and growing things
Some people have a childhood garden
Filled with purple peonies
Mine is sere
Throughout the year
Nothing grows here
Some people have a childhood rainbow
A sea of colors all aglow
Some people have a childhood rainbow
Red to violet in a row
Mine is gray
Bow of clay
Without a ray
Some people have a childhood temple
Covered with a million treasured dreams
Some people have a childhood temple
A sunny Wat of Gods and kings
Mine is plain
Squats in the rain
Functional 'n sane
Where childhood memories abound
Life flows vividly around
Where childhood memories have fled
Hearts lie dead
By the way take some fundas from me...
1'We have an opportunity to love all the time'
2 'A Problem Well Stated Is Half Solved'
3 'Deal With Your Resistance to Change'
4 'Denying your problem is appealing because it is easy'
5 'Improving is catching'
6 'Realistic, effective goals must be attainable, important, and taken seriously'
7 'Goals based on "I should" are not as motivating as goals based on "I want to"'
8 'Try to do less of what it does not work'
9 'Use "I" instead of "You" statements'
10 'What is more mortifying than to feel that you have missed the plum for want of courage to shake the tree?
From,
Sameer.
It is a very sweet article. You seem to be a person who expresses your feelings very well. There is innocence in the poem.
Keep it up...you noodles ki dukaan.
:-)
With best wishes,
Alex